Übersetzungen
Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne
Author: Tanemura
Arina
Translator:
Emi-chan
Chapter
21 Purely true, noble eyes. Therefore...
(Kiyoku junsui,
toutoki hitomi. Yue ni...)
Emi chan's note :
Well I didn't know that Meimi's
translations are going to be here as well ^^; So I hope
at the time it didn't seem that important (then I realised something, but I was too lazy to fix
it... ^^;). The present that Chiaki gives Maron is a small cross pendant that looks slightly
familiar after you've actually read KKJ up until now in Ribon. My theory is that Chiaki's
present ends up being Maron's rosary. It looks awfully similar to the one in her new costume
(I think so anyway). So theory number 2 : I think Maron and Chiaki end up working together
maybe? Seeing as Finn betrayed them and if Jeanne gets a new costume, she has to beworking
for someone right? So who else, but with Sinbad (who I guess isn't working for thedevil as
assumed before) and for God! But I still don't know about Access true identity....
Black angel doesn't actually mean he's evil... it's just a type of angel like "pure angel"
and "true angel" =)
note :
text in []
are actions
flashbacks
Access: As soon
as they reached the human world, all 3 of them separated. That's when the
incident started.
[Chiaki is
holding a crying/teary Maron]
[Both of them
stay silent]
(Access' flashback
type story)
Finn: Mmmm~~~~! It's morning in
the human world!
[stretches]
Finn: The sun's rays are great!
I'm full of pure spirit and energy!!
[an angel
comes flying]
Voice: Fi...Finn!!
Finn: Celcia got caught by a human!?
[Toki stands
by her with a sweat drop]
(at a temple
- the two are in some bushes)
Finn: I can feel a spirit...
Toki: Celcia is probably in there!
Finn: Come to think of it, it's
just like Celcia to break the first rule in just one hour and
23 minutes of us being here. By
the way Toki... What are you doing?
Toki: I'm enjoying our time alone.
(sml print)
Mmmm what a nice smell!
[Toki is smelling
Finn's hair]
Finn: Argh~~~~! Let go of me~~~!
Toki: Finn san! For a long time,
I have...
Finn: Wah~~~!
[footsteps]
[someone picks
up Toki and Finn]
Voice: Hi, you must be Celcia's
friends.
[A cool looking
temple guy (^^;) introduces himself]
Guy: Hello Toki, and you must be
Finn. I'm Kuhara Sagami.
[Finn blushes
and her heart flutters]
[There is
a loud cracking sound]
Finn: [Thinks]
-------!? What...? I just thought I heard a small sound in my heart...
Toki: Finn san!
[Finn realises]
[Finn and
Toki jump at Sagami]
Finn: Why you~~~~~~~~~! Give back
Celcia!
Toki: Ei! Yah! Toh!
(small print)
Wan! Tan! Men!
(note: The
first line are just like attack sounds and the line in small print is wan
tan men,
a type of
noodle dish ^^)
[Sagami doesn't
say anything as Toki and Finn bite his finger]
[Sagami smiles]
Sagami: I didn't kidnap Celcia.
I'm just taking care of her. Don't worry.
[another crack]
Finn: [thinks]
There's
that sound again.... why....
(in a room
in the temple -- Celcia is on a table)
Celcia: Finn! Toki!
Finn: Celcia! I heard you fainted!
Are you okay?
Celcia: I'm sorry~~~~! The air in
the human world didn't seem to suit me and I fainted!
(small print)
My pure spirit is zero!
Finn: [taking
a piece of her hair] All right.
Sagami: [thinks]
Hair?
[Finn's hair
glows]
[Celcia glows
too]
Celcia: Wow! What great pure spirit!
As one would expect from Finn!
[Sagami stares]
[Finn turns
around]
Finn: Sagami! You saved Celcia.
Sorry for biting you...
Sagami: That's all right. This is
nothing..
[Put his finger
in a small tub of water]
[The cut heals]
Finn and Toki: ! [thinks]
The
cut disappeared...?
Finn: Toki, that warer...
Toki: There is some pure spirit
in it. That could be the reason why he can see angels...
Finn: Toki... Did you hear a sound?
Toki: No.
Finn: [thinks] I wonder what this feeling is.... My heart is beating so fast.
Finn: [explaining
to Sagami] The "pure spirit" is something like an angel's life.
It's so
valuable that we could die if we
have none!
Celcia: I almost did!
Finn: Also, depending on an angel's
strength and rank, the maximum amount of pure spirit we
have can vary!
Sagami: Okay, so in other words...
If we say Celcia's maximum amount of strength was 100,
If we say Finn's maximum is 150, then when she recovers, hers will be 150 so she'll be stronger
than Celcia...
Finn and Celcia: [with thumbs up] Yes! That's right!!!
Finn: We store our pure spirit in our hair. So the more silver it shines, the more is in the
hair. Also, the more whiter the hair is, it's a barometer of how strong the angel is.
Sagami: What about you Finn? You have long, pea green hair.
[Finn blushes and sits in the corner]
Celcia: [whispers] Finn's hair colour comes from a sudden mutation.
(small print) She gets bothered by it.
Finn: [thinks] So it's funny colour...
[Toki watches as Sagami touches Finn's hair]
Sagami: [smiles] Ah, it's a very beautiful colour.
Finn: [thinks] Sagami... Thanks! [smiles]
[Toki frowns]
(in the garden)
Toki: Finn san! Seeing as Celcia
is better now, let's leave soon.
Finn: No! Breaking the rules is
above preparation! That person... he seems interested
Toki: But that holy water... No normal human could make "holy water". We should be careful...
Finn: He said that the water was from all God's power from the temple. We'll be fine!
Oh look, there's someone coming! He said lots of people came to get holy water from here.
[Finn smiles admiringly]
Finn: People with illnesses or people with worries... He said he wanted to make more holy
water for those people. Sagami is a wonderful and great person. When I'm with him
my heart beats fast.
Toki: I think it's pointless falling in love with him. [blushes]
Finn: No no no~~~! That's not it! Finn doesn't...
Toki: He has a lover!
[Toki shows Finn a photo of a sweet looking girl]
Toki: He had this photo decorating his desk!? Surely...
Voice: That's my younger sister.
[Sagami is behind Toki and Finn who have sweat drops]
(back at the
temple)
Sagami: My younger sister Natsuki
died three years ago at the age of sixteen. Since then,
Toki: ....
Sagami: She was a very nice girl. Gentle... honest....
Celcia: Then she might have become an angel.
Sagami: Angel?
Finn: Yup. An angel is someone who was pure and died.
Test: Usually when humans are born,
they receive a power from God called "life". If they
increase the power, then they can
change into "spirit" which is able to reincarnate. But normal
people use up their power because
of the hardships during their life and so "life" disappears
also. But if a person has even a
little bit before they die... for example if a newborn baby
dies, God has given them a little
bit of power so they are able to become an "angel".
Finn: People who have lived with pure hearts have that much "merit" so they may be an
holy power. Do you want to defy God's will?
Finn: But Sagami pleaded with me. He said lots of people were coming to get holy water today...
He said there wasn't enough from what he's got... He's troubled. I can't leave it alone.
[Celcia and Toki think]
Celcia: I suppose it can't be helped.
Toki: Celcia!? You're both too nice!
Celcia: We've been taken care of by Sagami san. It'll be okay if it's only a bit.
[Toki frowns]
Toki: [to Finn] I love you
[Finn's heart flutters]
Toki: Please don't do anything for him that will risk your life! Or do you like Sagami that much!?
Finn: N..no Toki! It's not that. Let go!
Toki: [grabs her shoulders] Don't try and hide it, tell me the truth! Finn san!
Finn: .... ! Sorry, Sagami will be waiting. I have to go!
[Finn runs off]
Toki: Finn san!!
[the cracking sound comes again and gets louder]
Finn monologue: The sound echoing in my heart is getting louder... It won't stop...
What is this!?
(in the gardens,
near a cave)
Finn: Sagami-----------! Sagami----------!
That's funny, maybe he isn't here
yet. This is the meeting place right?
(flashback)
Toki: Or do you like Sagami that much!?
Finn: That's not it. Sorry Toki...
The person I really love is...
Finn monologue: Not Sagami, but------...
[rocks from
the cave crack and crumble]
[Finn realises]
[rocks come
tumbling down]
[Finn screams]
[Finn gets
up with scratched and grazed skin]
Finn: Oh no! What am I going to
do? I have to quickly....
[Finn stares]
[water drips]
[There is
a girl frozen in ice]
[Finn stares
again]
Finn: [thinks]
A
girl in ice... She's....
Finn: Natsuki san.....? What's she
doing here?
[water drips]
Finn monologue: The melted water
turns into holy water... It can't be!
[the loud
cracking sounds come again]
Finn monologue: The sound won't
stop. [crack] It gets louder.
[crack]
What? What's wrong with me!? [pauses]
Me....
[CRACK]
Me-----!?
[Finn stares
hard at Natsuki]
[footsteps]
Voice: So you've seen it...
Sagami: You see, even after she
died, Natsuki is protecting this place. She gave herself to
God to create the holy water. So
you too will....
Finn: No! Natsuki didn't just die,
she was murdered by you!
(past flashback)
The holy water
underground the temple... The water heals many illnesses and was said
But that strange ice melted slowely and the water soon reached the bottom. And then,
Finn: He said "Be a human sacrifice in the ice and increase the holy water"
(past flashback)
Everything was for money... And so Natsuki lost her life...
Sagami: How do you know...
Finn: Because I am Natsuki! Older brother!! (oniisan)
[Sagami grins, then laughs]
Sagami: Is that so? Then no need for small talk. Give up yourself for me again Natsuki!
Finn: Celcia! Toki!
Sagami: From now on, these two will help me.
Finn: [shudders] No...
Sagami: Your hair is special and it can store more holy power than white hair can.
[Sagami moves his hand to Finn]
Finn: No! Let me go!
[Finn flies off]
Sagami: Natsuki!
Finn: [thinks] The sound in my heart that's been cracking since I met Sagami was
[Finn opens a door to a room where many people are sitting]
Finn: !
Sagami: See... There are many people wanting the holy power. Have some compassion.
[Finn stares]
Finn: [thinks] help!
(Back in Heaven)
Access: Damn! I was punished so
severely!
[Access' hair
is cut short]
Access: All I did was chop down
trees and cleared one mountain. They didn't have to
Rilu: Oh no! Finn will....
[Access is alert]
[Access runs in the room]
Access: What's wrong with Finn!?
Rilu: Access! No!!
Access monologue: The water mirror... it reflects what goes on in the human world... what...
[Sagami is
about to cut her hair]
Finn: No! Help! Help! ACCESS-------------!!!
Access: Finn-------!!
[Finn's hair
is cut]
[Finn is staring
in shock]
[Access stares
in shock]
[Rilu turns
away]
Finn monologue: My power is increasing.
It won't stop...
[There is
loud rumbling]
Sagami: Wh...what?
Finn monologue: It won't stop!!
[Finn glows]
[There is
a huge explosion]
Text: Although she was a pure angel,
her hair had the power of a true angel and at the
instant her hair was cut, the power
exploded. Many humans died. God lost much of his power.
For this serious crime -------...
Voice: Pure angel
Finn Fish. I sentence you to be banished from this garden.
Access: Let me see Finn! Please!!
An angel: It's too late! She's heading
to the gate of extinction.
Access: .....!? [cries]
No... I don't want it to end like this... Finn...
Access monologue: Not being able
to say "I love you" or "I'm sorry"
--------
[Finn pauses]
Finn monologue: Gate of extinction.
A white gate that returns everything to nothingness.
Voice: Wait.
[Finn turns her head]
Voice: There's a place for you here. Come.... Finn Fish.
(back to the
apartment in present time)
Access: Finn took the Devil's hand
and broke the rules to go through Hell's gate. She chose
the path of being a banished angel
so she could live.
[Maron is
teary, but calm]
END OF CHAPTER 21